Initial Reactions to documentary rushes

Sally

Things to do

Shaky scene recut

Less taking jackets off

Less Proud2b info

Check letters of objection to the council

Check out mock ups for council submission

Trim down

Use vox pops and confrontation to add drama. Diary

Likes the story.

 

Buzz

Cut down

Story at front maybe change to just rainbow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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